The Storm Within

Noor was walking through the storm, or was she the storm? The sky was getting darker, and the wind picked up pace, howling like a hungry monster.  It was April, and Rishra, a small town in West Bengal, was not new to these fierce storms, locally called Kal Boishakhi. Noor didn’t know how far she could go, but she walked anyway, through the wind, through the ache in her chest, through the emptiness.

That morning had shattered her.

Sahil, her fiancé, had betrayed her.

Five years of love, laughter, and shared dreams — all crumbled in a moment.

She had always sensed the growing distance, but hope had kept her blind. Was it love? She wasn’t sure anymore. But he had become a habit, one she didn’t know how to live without.

Her heart broke into a thousand pieces. Her chest tightened even at the thought of a life without Sahil. She felt hollow, cheated, and lost — like someone had stolen the map to her own life.

People were running for shelter, but Noor didn’t care. The old Noor wouldn’t have dared to step out in such a storm. But now, she kept walking through it.

With each gust of wind, her mind replayed the past 5 years. The love, the beautiful moments, and the dreams that she dared to share with Sahil. Now all gone.

As the fury inside her began to ebb, her strength faltered. Her feet dragged, and her vision blurred. A strong gust nearly knocked her off her feet.

A voice pierced through her thoughts. “Miss! This way, please! It’s dangerous!”
But she couldn’t hear it. Or maybe she didn’t want to.

Suddenly, a firm grip caught her by the arm and pulled her into safety. The wind died down instantly, or so it seemed. Did the storm calm down, or was it her thoughts?

She found herself inside a modest shelter home. The room was full of children, wide-eyed, quiet, scared. A young man stood beside her, catching his breath.

“I’m sorry,” he said quickly. “You were walking straight into the storm. It’s not safe.”

Noor pulled her arm free, still dazed. “Where… where are we?”

“I’m Kunal. This is a shelter for kids who’ve lost their families or been rescued from trafficking. I’m their caretaker.”

Noor’s irritation began to melt as she looked around. The children, huddled close, were watching her. Their silence whispered resilience, stories too painful for words.

Noor looked at her reflection in a broken mirror at the end of the hallway, and her heart sank. She looked tired, old, and raw. But when she looked at those children, something inside her stirred.

The ache inside her was too loud to allow words. Her gaze drifted across the room to a little boy in a wheelchair. He simply looked up at Noor, his face couldn’t be read, but his eyes, his eyes were bright, curious, unafraid.

Noor felt empty; she thought she had lost the capability to love, but then something melted inside her softly, like ice melting in sunlight. Her walls, her numbness, her resistance — all began to blur.

That evening, she stayed. She read to the children, helped serve dinner, and listened as they laughed. She comforted them. The hope, the innocence, the zeal for life that the children harboured brought tears to her eyes or was it her heartbreak?? But one thing was certain, her pain melted and flowed through her eyes.

As she stepped out, the storm clouds drifted apart, and sunlight spilt across the street. In that fleeting light, she saw a faint rainbow blooming across the bruised sky.

It was just the beginning.

She kept coming back. The children didn’t just help her heal; they made her believe again.
If they could love after loss, so could she.

Maybe heartbreak wasn’t an ending — maybe it was a door.

And those kids?
They were the key — to courage, to compassion, to beginning again.

PS: This post is part of Blogchatter Half Marathon 2025


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  1. The way you captured the chaos of emotions and turned them powerful was incredible. I could actually feel that storm with all the confusion, the anger, the quiet exhaustion that comes after it all settles. What really stood out was how you showed that strength isn’t loud; it’s just surviving the storm and still choosing to stand, waiting for a bright day. Beautifully written!!

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